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Nice track, but guitar sounds too bad for this theme:) This sound is to cheap - especially with these synths which sounds great!
I like that turning point, but I think it should be more energetic - better drums library can make it:).

aCreator responds:

Thank you for the Review!
It's was the first time I tried to record something with my guitar and I have almost zero experience in it... Thanks for the hint!
And yes... the drums will ALWAYS be my a problem. Should really take more time to do them...

This track needs better drum part and drums must sound better.
And it's strange that synths are playing the same melody - maybe You should try to make them sound different.

But melody still is pretty cool, it just needs better environment around it:)

OrignalTAG responds:

Thanks for your input! it really helps me to improve in my music making. The reason why I put the same melodies on different instruments is because I see it like a choir. Voices can be different but they can all make the same notes which then creates a harmony. And for the drums, I need to find better chip tune percussion instruments. Because all of mine sound a bit off. And these are the best ones that I could find that would fit the music. Once again thanks for your input! :D

Pretty magic:) But You should choose synths that sound more professional)

jolleos responds:

ok thanks for the tip I'll see if I can make it sound more professional.

This is awesome song!
But think that guitar sounds to "cheap". It doesn't sound bad, but this track needs something more powerful.:)

I agree with RealFaction.

Yes, it is great piece of ambient music, but 9 minutes it is all about the same.
But I must mention that You have chosen great sounds and it could be excellent piece of music if it was more "musically interesting"

Sorry for my bad English and I hope that You understand my idea.

I must say that Your track is perfect soundtrack for this art.
Nice work!

DuttonsaysHi responds:

Thank you! it's nice to know I captured the art's essence!

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